I really like the outcome of this piece as it is not something i would of thought of if i had time to plan, i have never thought about using random metal bars before even though i have thought about painting on metal. I find the composition interesting as it is all very random and without context this piece makes no sense. However, i am very interested to know what people would think of this piece without context. To improve this i would like to wrap more string around to make it have a stronger impact and actually prevent some areas from being fully viewed. I would also like to drip the string in paint, and pour paint on the string, allowing it to drip. However this may be difficult as it could cover other parts of the background however i plan to try this.
This experiment inspired an idea that could work for a final piece or experiment to try. I like the idea of using a mannequin in a dance position, wearing the undergarment outfit for the dancers and rotating. Or an abstract version where it is just the clothes/fabric hanging in a way that shows motion. They are surrounded by a circle (with a gap between the dancer and string) of string creating a wall. The string would be dipped in paint, allowing it to drip and some of the string drooping across others leaving gaps for the viewer to see, or move the string as if looking through blinds to view the dancer. Also there would be lights on the floor inside the string circle, shining on the dancer. This shows how in her dreams she is in the spotlight and feels important but the string also shows how she is trapped and incredibly isolated from real people and the real world.
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